Our first glimpse of Albus Dumbledore...
My version of Snape is not kind, but ze is less petty and mean to Harry than in the books. In the later books, we learned that Snape's real reason for being mean to Harry is that Snape had a grudge against James Potter. But ze also loved Lily Potter. Why would ze see Harry as the child of James, but not the child of Lily?
Maybe it's just because Harry is the same gender as James. In this story, I am trying to make gender roles less important. Maybe my version of Snape assumed that Harry would be like James, but after meeting zem, realized that ze had more in common with Lily.
Approximate readability: 5.15 (486 characters, 120 words, 8 sentences, 4.05 characters per word, 15.00 words per sentence)