Why do you think Granger pointed out how many points ze had earned? Ze could have just defended Harry without saying that. Would that have been a better decision? Worse?
And to follow up on the previous page, do you think it's ethical for Snape to be participating in the “house points” system at all, when it leads to the kind of intra-house bullying that we're seeing here?
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