In the last two pages, Snape conveniently left out the parts where ze swore at James and called Lily a “filthy little Mudblood”.
On an unrelated note, Harry knows the word “proxy” because spellbooks use it a lot.
Approximate readability: 8.77 (167 characters, 38 words, 2 sentences, 4.39 characters per word, 19.00 words per sentence)
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Also: Why do spellbooks use “proxy” a lot? Is that about sympathetic connections?